Creative+writing


 * 1) What do you know about this character now that s/he doesn’t yet know? something will happen in village
 * 2) What is this character’s greatest flaw? He did not stop neighborhood who were selling clear water.
 * 3) What do you know about this character that s/he would never admit? He`d never admit to sell clear water to people
 * 4) What is this character’s greatest asset? He is kind
 * 5) If this character could choose a different identity, who would s/he be? He would become young and work hard for his wife.
 * 6) What music does this character sing to when no one else is around? When he is younger, he would listen to hip pop. When he is older, he would listen to jazz.
 * 7) In what or whom does this character have the greatest faith? His wife.
 * 8) What is this character’s favorite movie? 007
 * 9) Does this character have a favorite article of clothing? Favorite shoes? he sometimes wear bland but he climbs so he wear properly shoes and a cloth which you can sweat.
 * 10) Does this character have a vice? Name it . Unkind neighborhood. His name is John.
 * 11) Name this character’s favorite person (living or dead). John Wayne. He is dead.
 * 12) What is this character’s secret wish? He does not have secret wish,
 * 13) What is this character’s proudest achievement? He saved his wife.
 * 14) Describe this character’s most embarrassing moment.
 * 15) What is this character’s deepest regret? He found magical water and he became young again!
 * 16) What is this character’s greatest fear? Greatest fear is not people to be baby like his wife.
 * 17) Describe this character’s most devastating moment. He found magical water but neighborhood copied it, and hes sold it.
 * 18) What is this character’s greatest achievement? He became younger, also he saved his wife.
 * 19) What is this character’s greatest hope? To live longer, and enjoy his young age again.
 * 20) Does this character have an obsession? Name it. He does not have an obsession.
 * 21) What is this character’s greatest disappointment? His wife became baby.
 * 22) What is this character’s worst nightmare? His wife became baby.
 * 23) Whom does this character most wish to please? Why? His wife, because for him, his wife is the best person.
 * 24) Describe this character’s mother. Her mother is very kind like him. She always sung to him when he was young
 * 25) Describe this character’s father. His father was hard worker. He died earlier than his mother.
 * 26) If s/he had to choose, with whom would this character prefer to live? His wife
 * 27) Where does this character fall in birth order? What effect does this have?
 * 28) Describe this character’s siblings or other close relatives. His has cousin who became famous singer.
 * 29) Describe this character’s bedroom. Include three cherished items. The color of bed is bluish gray. There are a book, glasses to read book, icing to ice his body sometime, and lamp to light up the room.
 * 30) What is this character’s birth date? How does this character manifest traits of his/her astrological sign? August, 16th.
 * 31) If this character had to live in seclusion for six months, what six items would s/he bring? Some tools to cut and make house, food, cell phone, mp3, glasses, and icing.
 * 32) Why is this character angry? He is angry, because of evil neighborhood.
 * 33) What calms this character? His wife
 * 34) Describe a recurring dream or nightmare this character might have. He saw that his wife become animal next.
 * 35) List the choices (not circumstances) that led this character to his/her current predicament.
 * 36) List the circumstances over which this character has no control.
 * 37) What wakes this character in the middle of the night? Wired dream of his wife..
 * 38) How would a stranger describe this character? He looks kind.
 * 39) What does this character resolve to do differently every morning? wakes up early and go into the mountain.
 * 40) Who depends on this character? Why? His wife, because he loves her.
 * 41) If this character knew s/he had exactly one month to live, what would s/he do? He would go to the town and spend great time living near ocean or lake with his wife. Do things that he could not do.
 * 42) How would a dear friend or relative describe this character? They would describe him kind and smiles a lot.
 * 43) What is this character’s most noticeable physical attribute? Healthy
 * 44) What is this character hiding from him/herself? He sometimes wants to rest, because he is hard worker and he does not really take a rest. He works too much.
 * 45) Write one additional thing about your character. He used to go to disco.

Postive -He can be young again -He can drink beer. - He can work hard again. - He can have great time with his wife. - He can enjoy his young life again Negative - His evil neighborhood had bad idea. - His wife turned to baby, because she drank it too much. - He did not stop neighborhood - People turned old again - He had interesting dream but it made him scary.

3. Describe the setting. An old man found the magical water which you drink, and become younger. Evil man tried to sell th magical water, but he was mean so horrible happened.

4. Man vs Man

5.How does the main character change over the course of the story? The old man changed his village to the magical village, makes them happy.

6. Describe the use of Irony in your story.

7.What symbols presented in your story?

8. Magical, Imaginable.



Short Story Once upon a time, near a mountain, there was a village where an old man and his wife lived. The old man's job was to cut trees into small pieces and sell them. "I am old now, so this job is getting hard for me," said the man. “Oh, my back hurts and my eyes are getting weak and bleary.”

 The man climbed the mountain to cut down trees. It was a very warm day, so he was thirsty. When the man looked down, he saw clear water flowing from a rock. “Thank god!” He drank the cold water. The water was delicious! “Oh, I'm cured now! I feel like I can run!” The man was happy. He cut trees, sold it and went home.  “I'm back!” the man yelled with his loud voice.  “Wow! That was fast!” his wife said. She looked surprised. The man looked in a mirror and he realized that he's not old anymore!  “Maybe I'm dreaming,” the man said. His wife was speechless.  After recovering from the shock, she smiled happily and said, “You look great!”  “I have heard about an old man with a terrible illness who drank clear water from the mountains and became young again. The illness had also been cured. Maybe this is it," said the man. 　“I didn't believe the story because it seemed impossible, but maybe it was true.” The man told his wife about everything that happened to him.  “I am going to have some too!” she said and left their home. The man was excited to see her beautiful, young look. However, she didn’t come back which worried the man. So he called his friends and went into the mountains to look for her. She wasn’t there.  “Where did she go?” the man yelled.  “Maybe she lost,” his friend said. As they were discussing about her, they heard a baby crying.  “What's going on here?” the man asked quietly. The group heard a baby crying from the bush. When they looked in the bush, there was a baby wearing the wife's clothes. She was crying loudly. “Oh dear, she drank too much so she became a baby,” the man cried. He took a big breath. He had no choice, he carried her back]\ home. The man was sad; even though his wife is here, she can't talk or understand anything. The man felt lonely but he worked hard and decided to raise the baby. A man in the neighborhood, Johnny, heard the story about them. “I want some,” he said and he went to go get the water. “Oh look, I'm young now,” he laughed. “I might be able to sell it to people so I can be rich!” Johnny is an evil man. His idea succeeded! Everybody became younger. The man was surprised when he saw Johnny selling the magical water, but he didn’t stop him. He thought it would be good if everyone became young again.

One day, the man saw Johnny trying to get the magical water from the rock. “Come on! Give me the magical water or I will kick you!” Johnny said and kicked the rock. How awful is this? After he kicked it, water flowed from the rock. “Wait, the colour is different," Johnny said. "Oh well, I'll be rich! I'll be rich!” He laughed and screamed. After he walked away, the man sat down and I stroked it softly. Then, I heard voice from somewhere. “Bring this water to your wife and give it to her,” the mysterious voice said. The clear water flowed from the rock. The man thanked the rock, and he went home. He fed the magical water to the baby. A few minutes later, she grew and grew. She grew to the same age as me. “You are the same age as me!” the man shouted happily. She looked a little bit confused. Outside, Johnny was selling a bottle of the magical water. The man told his wife about everything. The wife said, “There is more to the story, 'The Old Man and the Clear Water' ”. She then explained to her husband, "After the man found the magical water, another man started to sell it to people. A few days later, the people who drank the magical water turned old again." The man quickly ran out of his house, and went to Johnny. There were old people holding the bottle. People started to complain to Johnny. Johnny was too scared to talk so he tried to walking away slowly from them like a turtle. The man stopped Johnny and explained what happened, “This happened because you were mean to the rock. You are always evil so that's why this happened!” Johnny looked like he understood and he ran away. Johnny then turned old again. "Oh!" The man woke up, he was in the bed. "What a wired dream I had." He said, he was sweating. "Well, time to work." And he went to living room. There was a bottle on the floor.